Short Stories – 4

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You can find part 1part 2 and part 3 here.

This time I wanted to dabble in different genres and not find my way back to the love stories, and I really hope that this edition has helped me branch out.

Would love to hear what you have to say about this, feedback is welcome anyday and constructive criticism is highly appreciated! 😀


45 thoughts on “Short Stories – 4

  1. As much as I enjoy reading your love stories, this one was very enjoyable. The mourning and misery of suffering a lost one was wonderfully portrayed in the the third entry. You are amazing!

  2. The second and third were executed with such skill. I’m in awe! Loved the circle/tangent metaphor in the second (and how you linked the idea of “circles” to familiar aspects of culture, like roti and bangles.) I was also blown away by the jolting emotional ending of the third one. Superb work! You have outdone yourself. 🙂

  3. Hey!! Just one word – mastaan!!! 😀 Thats my standard response to something I love! You are growing exponentially in your writing skills. And for someone who was great to begin with, where will you end up being?? 🙂

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